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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. You can't judge people with your naked eye!
2. Have you seen the Statue of Liberty in U.S.A?
3. You have to judge people with loving heart.
4. I felt guilty when my mom asked me "Did you brake the flower pot?".
5. I can't see viruses with my naked eye.

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Hi there, Clair!

Here's your edited homework!

Cheers,
Jean~~


                   Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.


1. You can't judge people with your naked eye!
>> OR: We can't judge others with our naked eye!

2. Have you seen the Statue of Liberty in U.S.A?
>> Have you seen the Statue of Liberty in the U.S.A?

3. You have to judge people with loving heart.
>> You have to judge people with a loving heart.
>> OR: Having a loving heart is important. 

4. I felt guilty when my mom asked me "Did you brake the flower pot?".
>> I felt guilty when my mom asked me, "Did you break the flower pot?"
>> OR: I felt guilty when my mom asked me if I broke the flower pot.

5. I can't see viruses with my naked eye.
>> correct
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