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Korean, mathematics and English are the most important subjects for students in my country. Students in Korea have to get high score in these subjects for their success. We only tend to study subjects which are related to the entrance exam for university because teachers and parents always stress the importance of major subjects that I mentioned above. If we graduate a major university in Seoul, it will be easy to get a good job. However, students learn a lot of things after school as well as regular curriculum such as music, arts and sports these days regardless of their intention. Parents tend to send their children to various institutions after school because they want their children to survive in this competitive environment.

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JOYFUL DAY TO YOU MR. HWANG~! ^^
Life without endeavor is like entering a jewel mine and coming out with empty hands.
The best way to not feel hopeless is to get up and do something. Don¡¯t wait for good things to happen to you. If you go out and make some good things happen, you will fill the world with hope, you will fill yourself with hope. 
The ones who say you can¡¯t are too afraid you will! ~^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Korean mathematics and English are the most important subjects for students in my country. 
>>> CORRECT
Students in Korea have to get high scores in these subjects for their success.
>>> CORRECT
 We only tend to study subjects which are related to the entrance exam for university because teachers and parents always stress the importance of major subjects which were mentioned above.
>>> CORRECT
 If we graduate in a major university in Seoul, it will be easy to get a good job.
>>> CORRECT
 However, students learn a lot of things after school as well as regular curriculum such as music, arts and sports these days regardless of their intention. 
>>> CORRECT
Parents tend to send their children to various institutions after school because they want their children to survive in this competitive environment.
>>> CORRECT
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