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Atfer this, I need to finish remaining job that I didn't finished.
Next week, I need to finish remaining job that I din't finished.
I'm looking forword for Saturday to familly come.
I'm looking forwrdd for Friyday to job finish in the week.

On the first time I read it, it's unclear but now it's much clearer.
On the first time I join my company, the work is unclear but now it's lettle clearer than first time.

Because I haven't seen this word for a long time. I forgot it.
Because I haven't seen this expression for a long time, so I forgot.

I searched for the meaning of the word vice.
I searched for the meaning of the idiom find out.

I will keep on reading this after the class and I'll understand it hopefully.
I will keep on waching the youtube after the class and I'll know the new knowledge.

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Hello Jun,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



Atfer this, I need to finish remaining job that I didn't finished.
>>> After this, I need to finish the remaining job that I didn't finish.

Next week, I need to finish remaining job that I din't finished.
>>> Next week, I need to finish the remaining job that I didn't finished.

I'm looking forword for Saturday to familly come.
>>> I'm looking forward to Saturday to come because my family will come.

I'm looking forwrdd for Friyday to job finish in the week.
>>> I'm looking forward to Friday to which means that my job will finish this week.

On the first time I read it, it's unclear but now it's much clearer.
>>> The first time I read it, it's unclear but now it's much clearer.

On the first time I join my company, the work is unclear but now it's lettle clearer than first time.
>>> The first time I joined my company, the work is unclear but now it's a little clearer than the first time.

Because I haven't seen this word for a long time. I forgot it.
>>> Because I haven't seen this word for a long time. I forgot about it.

Because I haven't seen this expression for a long time, so I forgot.
>>> CORRECT 

I searched for the meaning of the word vice.
>>> CORRECT 

I searched for the meaning of the idiom find out.
>>> I searched for the meaning of the idiom 'find out'.

I will keep on reading this after the class and I'll understand it hopefully.
>>> CORRECT 

I will keep on waching the youtube after the class and I'll know the new knowledge.
>>> I will keep on watching Youtube after the class and I'll know a new knowledge.
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