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Are you annoyed by demanding clients at your work? Answer in a short paragraph.

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I expacted this question! Yes. Actually I have 1 client. I just called his name is "A". A is amazing demanding client. A wants fast, cheap, perfect. So when A call is start, I can't sleep that night. hmm. But A is honest person, I don't hate A. But one day, I have to hit A!

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Hi Eva! This is a hilarious and meaningful composition.

In this life time, we cannot avoid difficult people so we have to endure the time we deal with them. We actually learn a lot of things from them such as accuracy and 
time efficiency. These things are very important to learn.

Thank you so much for sharing your experience with "A". See you on your next essay.

-T. Donna =)

I expacted this question! Yes. Actually I have 1 client. 
>> Correct! Or: expected

I just called his name is "A". A is amazing demanding client. 
>> I just call him "A". A is an amazingly demanding client. 

A wants fast, cheap, perfect. So when A call is start, I can't sleep that night. hmm. 
>> A wants fast, cheap, and perfect. So when A starts to call, I can't sleep that night. Hmm. 

But A is honest person, I don't hate A. But one day, I have to hit A!
>> But A is an honest person, I don't hate A. But one day, I have to hit A!
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