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What makes someone beautiful?

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What makes someone beautiful?

A lady's appearance makes her beautiful. I think that it is evident.

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Good day, Sunghoon!^^

Thank you for this short but meaningful answer. Keep appreciating the beauty in everything that you see. ^^

Have a great day ahead.

~Kelly^^

What makes someone beautiful?
A lady's appearance makes her beautiful. I think that it is evident.

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