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I want to visit Mexico because I would like to try tacos and burritos. There are Mexican cuisine restaurants in Korea, but they are expensive and most of the dishes are tailored to the tastes of Koreans. However, I¡¯ve learned that tacos are very popular food that most of Mexican regularly have as a daily meal. Also, if I go to local restaurant, I would be able to try the real spice of Mexican food. Therefore, I want to visit Mexico and try some fresh and cheap tacos.

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Good afternoon Min Ji^^ 
Ahmm tacos are great! 
I've never had the real tacos, but I hope to may have try it some day. 
Thank you^^ 

I want to visit Mexico because I would like to try tacos and burritos. 
>>> CORRECT!
There are Mexican cuisine restaurants in Korea, but they are expensive and most of the dishes are tailored to the tastes of Koreans. 
>>> There are Mexican restaurants in Korea, but they are expensive and most of the food is tailored to Korean tastes.
However, I¡¯ve learned that tacos are very popular food that most of Mexican regularly have as a daily meal. 
>>> However, I learned that tacos are a very popular food that most Mexicans eat on a daily basis.
Also, if I go to local restaurant, I would be able to try the real spice of Mexican food. 
>>> Also, if I go to a local restaurant, I can taste the real spice of Mexican food.
Therefore, I want to visit Mexico and try some fresh and cheap tacos.
>>> CORRECT! 
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