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If you will be able to choose a dream that you will have in your sleep, what dream would it be? Why?

I want to meet my university friend in a dream. She is far from me and we didn't contact for a long time. We were close in a past, however our relationship got far away for no reason. I contacted in last year but we couldn't meet. I wonder how she lives and want to know her news. If we can't meet each other, I wish we'll meet in a dream. That'll be more comfortable and happy.

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Hi, Libby!

Good afternoon.
Thank you for submitting your homework.
While reading your answer, I could totally relate since I haven't met my closest friends for a long time now.
I hope that we'll get to meet them in our dreams and have a good chat.
But of course, I hope that after this pandemic, we'll get the chance to meet them in person too. ^^

~Teacher Gina

I want to meet my university friend in a dream. 
>> CORRECT.
She is far from me and we didn't contact for a long time. 
>> She is far from me and we didn't contact each other for a long time.
We were close in a past, however our relationship got far away for no reason. 
>> We were close in the past, however, our relationship drifted apart for no reason.
I contacted in last year but we couldn't meet. 
>> I contacted her last year but we couldn't meet.
I wonder how she lives and want to know her news. 
>> CORRECT.
If we can't meet each other, I wish we'll meet in a dream. 
>> CORRECT.
That'll be more comfortable and happy.
>> CORRECT.
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