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Is it common in your country to complain about bad service?

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In my country,
Most of the people are complain about bad service that is common.
Many people are visited to the store, almost staff is very kind for customer.
So, many people are complaint the bad service.

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Here are my corrections for you:


In my country, Most of the people are complain about bad service that is common.

>> In my country, most people complain about bad service and that is common.
Many people are visited to the store, almost staff is very kind for customer.

>> Many people visit stores and almost all of the staff in the stores are very kind to customers.
So, many people are complaint the bad service.

>> So many people complain about bad service.

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