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What do you say if someone wants to help you?

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In my case, when someone wants to help me almost I help them.
Actually I am free consulting to other organizations about Art teacings.
Of course I only help them when they have meanful concerns or efforts.
I am happy that I can help them.

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Hi Lily,
Thank you for today's homework.
Talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
What do you say if someone wants to help you?
In my case, when someone wants to help me almost I help them.
>>In my case, when someone wants to help me, I am also eager to help them.
Actually I am free consulting to other organizations about Art teacings.
>>Actually, I give free consultations to other organizations in how to teach arts.
Of course I only help them when they have meanful concerns or efforts.
>>Of course, I only help them when they have meaningful concerns or if they exert enough effort.
I am happy that I can help them.
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or>>I am glad to be able to help them.
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