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Describe the best food that I ever had.

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Pu phat phongcurry is one of the most famouse Thai food. Whenever I visit in Bangkok, I go the restaurant where is famouse for Pu phat phongcurry, which named Ssombun seafood.
Pu phat phongcurry is made with mud crab, coconut milk and egg. It is a little creamy and salty.
So I always eat it with vegetable fried rice.
They have a ferpect harmony and taste.
I will go to Bangkok to enjoy this fantastic food aftrr this pandemic is over.

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Hi there Young Won!

I could taste this sumptuous dish in my mind with this composition you have written. 

You have used accurate adjectives and simple sentences to express your thoughts about Pu phat phongcurry.

Let us discuss more of this in class later.

See you!

-T. Donna =)

Pu phat phongcurry is one of the most famouse Thai food. Whenever I visit in Bangkok, I go the restaurant where is famouse for Pu phat phongcurry, which named Ssombun seafood.
>> Pu phat phongcurry is one of the most famous Thai food. Whenever I visit Bangkok, I go to the restaurant where it is famous for Pu phat phongcurry, which is named Ssombun seafood.

Pu phat phongcurry is made with mud crab, coconut milk and egg. It is a little creamy and salty.
>> Correct!

So I always eat it with vegetable fried rice.
>> Correct!

They have a ferpect harmony and taste.
>> They have perfect harmony and taste.

I will go to Bangkok to enjoy this fantastic food aftrr this pandemic is over.
>> Correct! 
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