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that work should be for mom

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It's our habit and custom that every mom is to do work as house chores back in the day even if they have a job or not
There are still rest like this custom.
so I think that most of mom have to do a chores work in their home.
it seem like it is not to be fair to man and woman but we still have like this custom of inequality

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Hey, Jin. I am glad to see you did this homework. It is terrible that women had to go through this custom but I am also happy to hear that this kind of custom is changing and more men are open to doing house chores and they do not feel it makes them less of a man. I trust you also do house chores?^^ Have a good night. ~Teacher Jane c",)


that work should be for mom
>> That responsibility falls on the mother.

It's our habit and custom that every mom is to do work as house chores back in the day even if they have a job or not
>> It is our habit and custom that every mom is to do house chores back in the day whether they have a job or not.

There are still rest like this custom.
>> There are still those who practice this custom.

so I think that most of mom have to do a chores work in their home.
>> So I think most moms still do the chores in their home.

it seem like it is not to be fair to man and woman but we still have like this custom of inequality
>> It does not seem fair to men and women but we still have this custom of inequality.

 
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