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Describe your favorite TV personality and explain why you like him/her.

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My favorite TV personality is a Korean comedian, Jae-seok Yu. I like him because of his gentleness and honesty. How difficult situations he faces, he tries to take care of his colleagues first. And although he is a comedian who has to make people laugh, he doesn't insult others and acts gently. Furthermore, the best part of his personality is that he is very humble. After winning the comedian prices several times, he still is very humble and do not boast at others. Instead of fancying himself, he tries to help his colleagues and young generations to develop better. A lot of his colleagues actually revealed that they got a lot of assistance from Mr.Yu. Despite his large fortune, he doesn't live an extravagant life. Instead, he enjoys a simple lifestyle. Furthermore, he is a secret angel. He is known for donating a lot of money secretly. During this COVID-19 pandemic, he has donated a lot of money for the country. As he possesses warm personality and deep consideration, I like him.

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Hello, Minhee! It's really good to know that you value people with good personality instead of looks! I admire you for that! -Faith-
My favorite TV personality is a Korean comedian, Jae-seok Yu.
>> CORRECT
I like him because of his gentleness and honesty. 
>> CORRECT
OR: His gentleness and honesty make me look up to him.
How difficult situations he faces, he tries to take care of his colleagues first. 
>> No matter how difficult the situation he faces, he tries to take care of his colleagues first. 
And although he is a comedian who has to make people laugh, he doesn't insult others and acts gently. 
>> CORRECT
OR: Even though his role is to make people laugh, he isn't rude towards others.
Furthermore, the best part of his personality is that he is very humble.
>>  CORRECT
After winning the comedian prices several times, he still is very humble and do not boast at others. 
>> After winning the comedian prizes several times, he still is very humble and do not boast about it. 
Instead of fancying himself, he tries to help his colleagues and young generations to develop better. 
>> Instead of fancying himself, he tries to help his colleagues and young generations to become better. 
A lot of his colleagues actually revealed that they got a lot of assistance from Mr.Yu. 
>> CORRECT
Despite his large fortune, he doesn't live an extravagant life. 
>> CORRECT
OR: Despite his wealth, he is still living a frugal life.
Instead, he enjoys a simple lifestyle. 
>> CORRECT
Furthermore, he is a secret angel. 
>> CORRECT
He is known for donating a lot of money secretly. 
>> CORRECT
During this COVID-19 pandemic, he has donated a lot of money for the country. 
>> CORRECT 
OR: During this pandemic, he has donated large sums of money for the country.
As he possesses warm personality and deep consideration, I like him.
>> CORRECT
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