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I think young people are independent from each other. Because, they believe the way to become an adult.
On the other hand, older people are dependent from each other.
Because of they need a help each other and they maybe think the way they live together.

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The price of success is hard work, dedication to the job at hand, and the determination that whether we win or lose, we have applied the best of ourselves to the task at hand.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think young people are independent from each other. 
>>> CORRECT
Because, they believe the way to become an adult.
>>> Because, they believe on the ways to become an adult.
On the other hand, older people are dependent from each other.
>>> CORRECT
Because of they need a help each other and they maybe think the way they live together.
>>> Because they need a help from each other and they may be thinking of living together.

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