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What one geat lesson did you learn from your car accident yesterday?

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I had experienced 2times in my life.
Firdt time was when I turn left after drop my children at school. There was motocycle comming forward to my car. We bumped and the motocycle driver got hurt on his ankle.
It was happened because of both driver's carelessness.
Second one is just 2days ago. This time was due to nobody's fault.
The road was very slippery because of heavy snow.
The car in front of me was stopping to enter parking place in the apartment complex. Following my car was on the way down.
I tried to stop my car but the break didn't work at that time. My car was just sliding, which I was very embarrassed and freatened.
I felt strong helpless. With this accident, I learned that don't drive in bad weather, eapecially a snow day below zero.

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Good afternoon to you Young Won!

Until now I cannot believe that you have met an accident just a couple of days ago. I am relieved however to know that you are alright and that no one was hurt.

We cannot do anything about that accident anymore as it already happened but we can always avoid future accidents by driving defensively, staying alert and focused on the road, and always thinking clearly in any given situation.

I hope you are feeling better.

See you later in our class. Take care.

-T. Donna =)

I had experienced 2times in my life.
>> I had experienced it two times in my life.

Firdt time was when I turn left after drop my children at school. There was motocycle comming forward to my car. We bumped and the motocycle driver got hurt on his ankle.
>> During the first time was when I turned left after dropping my children at school. There was a motorcycle coming towards my car. We bumped and the motorcycle driver got hurt on his ankle.

It was happened because of both driver's carelessness.
>> It happened because of both driver's carelessness.

Second one is just 2days ago. This time was due to nobody's fault.
>> The second one was just 2 days ago. This time it was nobody's fault.

The road was very slippery because of heavy snow.
>> Correct!

The car in front of me was stopping to enter parking place in the apartment complex. Following my car was on the way down.
>> The car in front of me was stopping to enter in the parking place in the apartment complex. Following my car was another on the way down.

I tried to stop my car but the break didn't work at that time. My car was just sliding, which I was very embarrassed and freatened.
>> Correct! 
Or: frightened with

I felt strong helpless. With this accident, I learned that don't drive in bad weather, eapecially a snow day below zero.
>> I felt a strong helplessness. With this accident, I learned not to drive in bad weather, especially a snow day below zero.
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