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Julie wants some cookies.
The birds fly in the sky.
Michael is hiding behind the door.
He do not want to eat his lunch.
Annie and Anna are running on the field.

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Good day, Ju A! ^_^
Your sentences are improving.
Keep it up!

- T. Rina


1. Julie wants some cookies.
>> CORRECT!

2. The birds fly in the sky.
>> CORRECT!

3. Michael is hiding behind the door.
>> CORRECT!

4. He do not want to eat his lunch.
>> He does not want to eat his lunch.

5. Annie and Anna are running on the field.
>> CORRECT!
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