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The services I care about before I go to the restaurant and the reason why.

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When I decided to go to the restaurants, I care about three important points to choose where I go . 
>>> When I decided to go to a restaurant, I care about three important points to choose where I go. 
Taste of the food and cleanliness of the restaurant is essential for me, and furthermore I care about the mood of the restaurant. 
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The first two points, taste and cleanliness. 
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The restaurant has to serve tasty food because I pay for the food what I eat, so it¡¯s necessary. 
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Also the cleanliness, if the restaurant is not clean and well arranged, I feel uncomfortable with it and also it might be the danger of food poisoning. 
>>>  Also the cleanliness, if the restaurant is not clean and well arranged, I feel uncomfortable with it and also there might be the danger of food poisoning.  
Third one, ¡®mood¡¯ is additional but I consider it a lot before I get in to the restaurant. 
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When I consider about the mood of the restaurant, it¡¯s including the attitude of staff who serves and how the atmosphere is relax and comfortable while eating inside of that restaurant. 
>>>  When I consider about the mood of the restaurant, it include the attitude of staff who serves and how relaxed and comfortable the atmosphere is while eating inside of that restaurant. 
If the food tastes really good but the staff¡¯s attitude is not kind and polite I will not go to that restaurant again because I will remember that restaurants as an unpleasant place. 
>>> If the food tastes really good but the staff¡¯s attitude is not kind and polite I will not go to that restaurant again because I will remember that restaurant as an unpleasant place.  
Also, uncomfortable and restricted atmosphere interrupt me to enjoy meal well. 
>>>  Also, uncomfortable and restricted atmosphere interrupt me to enjoy the meal well. 
So I care of these as an important factor before I go to the restaurant, and I hope to get these services while eating meals.
>>>  So I care of these as important factors before I go to the restaurant, and I hope to get these services while eating meals.

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