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like the paper of oar lesson says bananas are good for oar body.
and also other fruits are good for oar body and skin.
vegetables are good for oar body and skin too.
for oar body and of corse beautl too.
and that is I know about what makes someone beautiful.

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Hello Ruby!😍
Thank you answering our essay question. I totally agree to what you have shared about being beautiful. So, don't forget to eat your fruits and vegetables so you will always stay healthy and beautiful.😉
Have a good night!😊
~Kelly^^
like the paper of oar lesson says bananas are good for oar body.
>> Based on our lesson, bananas are good for our body.
and also other fruits are good for oar body and skin.
>> Other fruits are good for the body and skin.
vegetables are good for oar body and skin too.
>> Vegetables are good for our body and skin, too.
for oar body and of corse beautl too.
>> It makes our body beautiful too.
and that is I know about what makes someone beautiful.
>> For me, that's what makes someone beautiful.
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