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my project team

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I was unhappy yesterday because my project team.

I have 2 project team .
one is sk hynix .
other is new solution team .

sk hynix team consist my company member and freelance .
new solution team consist all freelance.
freelance make always ploblem.

they fought each other.
Even one member went out.
Other member insisted he was problem and told my customer anout situation.
I was supprised of that .
I coludn`t understand
How to tell the customer this situation.
Maybe their think was child.

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Thank you for this Sir John.

I was unhappy yesterday because my project team.

>>> 
I was unhappy yesterday because of my project team.   
I have 2 project team 
one is sk hynix ..other is new solution team .
>>> I have two project teams. One is with SK-Hynix and the the other is with New Solutions team.  
sk hynix team consist my company member and freelance .
>>>  SK-Hynix team consists of my company members and freelancers.  
new solution team consist all freelance.
>>>  New solution team consists of all freelancers. 
freelance make always ploblem.
>>> Freelancers always make problems.   
they fought each other.
>>> They fought with each other.   
Even one member went out.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Even one member quit.   
Other member insisted he was problem and told my customer anout situation.
>>> Other members insisted he was the problem and told my customer about the situation.   
I was supprised of that .
>>>  I was surprised of that.  
I coludn`t understand How to tell the customer this situation.
>>>  I didn't know how to tell the customer this situation.  
Maybe their think was child.
>>>  Maybe they think like a child.   
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