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Do you think policies are needed? Why?

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yes. because, if we have no policies, some people don't keep the basic manner.
if that's the case, the company's operations are not going well.

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Hello Yun Jeong,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



Do you think policies are needed? Why?


yes. because, if we have no policies, some people don't keep the basic manner.
>>> Yes because if we don't have policies then some people will not show any manners at all. 

if that's the case, the company's operations are not going well.
>>>  If that is the case, then the company's operation will not go well. 
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