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I assume when I take a business trip abroad, I will ask the Hotel's manager or staff to a Korean restaurant as soon as I arrive.
Because it is very important for me to have a meal, I have to eat Korean food one meal a day at least.
I am looking for a Korean restaurant.
Are there any Korean restaurants nearby?
How can I get there?
Is it possible to walk there?
Or is there public transportation such as a bus or subway to get there?
Do you happen to know that of the business hours?
Now at 7 p.m., I am afraid when I get there, the restaurant was closed.
Maybe is there a Korean restaurant or a restaurant selling Korean food in the hotel.
How much the price of the food usually?
I know the food selling in hotel more expensive than that of local restaurant.

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It was indeed lovely meeting you today, Sean. Here's your edited composition!
Have a good one!

Cheers,
Jean~~

I assume when I take a business trip abroad, I will ask the Hotel's manager or staff to a Korean restaurant as soon as I arrive.
Because it is very important for me to have a meal, I have to eat Korean food one meal a day at least.
>> I assume when I take a business trip abroad, I will ask the hotel manager or staff about Korean restaurants as soon as I arrive.  It is very important for me to have a meal, and I have to eat Korean food one meal a day at least.

I am looking for a Korean restaurant.
Are there any Korean restaurants nearby?
How can I get there?
Is it possible to walk there?
>> correct

Or is there public transportation such as a bus or subway to get there?
>> or: Is there any available public transport, such as a bus or subway that I can take to get there?

Do you happen to know that of the business hours?
>> Do you happen to know their business hours?

Now at 7 p.m., I am afraid when I get there, the restaurant was closed.
>> It's now 7 p.m., I am afraid when I get there, the restaurant will be closed.

Maybe is there a Korean restaurant or a restaurant selling Korean food in the hotel.
>> Is there perhaps a Korean restaurant or a restaurant selling Korean food in the hotel?
>> or: Maybe there is a Korean restaurant or a restaurant selling Korean food in the hotel.

How much the price of the food usually?
>> How much is the usual price of food?
>> or: How much does food cost usually?

I know the food selling in hotel more expensive than that of local restaurant.
>> I know that food in hotels are more expensive than that in local restaurants.

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