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is very famous cartoons in my country. There is Jadoo, Jadoo's best friend Minji, and a lot of friends. I like Jadoo's personality. Jadoo is very outgoing, sometimes kind, and she is good at sports. Jadoo love football, she can kick the ball to school to house. Jadoo is very popular person, so she have a lot of friends. I think all of people in school are Jadoo's friends, even that is teacher. If who question to me: "What kind of friends do you want to have?" then I will say: "I want to have friends like Jadoo" Also, I am outgoing, and positive, so when Jadoo became my friends, I think we can communicate well.

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Hello Maria!

I think that you are Jadoo in real life becaue you have a very charming and wholesome personality. You make a good leader and can influence others to be positive and do good.

In fact, you can be better than Jadoo in real life!

Thanks for sending me this composition once again. Always keep up the good work, Maria!

See you in class.

-T. Donna =)

<Hello Jadoo> is very famous cartoons in my country. 
>> <Hello Jadoo> is a very famous cartoons in my country. 

There is Jadoo, Jadoo's best friend Minji, and a lot of friends. I like Jadoo's personality. 
>> The characters are Jadoo, Jadoo's best friend Minji, and a lot of friends. I like Jadoo's personality. 

Jadoo is very outgoing, sometimes kind, and she is good at sports. Jadoo love football, she can kick the ball to school to house. Jadoo is very popular person, so she have a lot of friends. 
>> ...Jadoo loves football, she can kick the ball to school from the house. Jadoo is a very popular person, so she has a lot of friends. 

I think all of people in school are Jadoo's friends, even that is teacher. If who question to me: "What kind of friends do you want to have?" then I will say: "I want to have friends like Jadoo" Also, I am outgoing, and positive, so when Jadoo became my friends, I think we can communicate well.
>> I think all of the people in school are Jadoo's friends even his teacher. If you ask me: "What kind of friends do you want to have?" Then I will say: "I want to have friends like Jadoo" Also, I am outgoing and positive, so when Jadoo will become my friend, I think we can communicate well.
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