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In your own opinion, how can we prevent cheating in schools?

작성자: 김*희
2021-01-19 360

회원님의 영작문

First of all, schools can put more teachers into the test sites. If the teachers have separate roles in different places, it may help them to keep an eye on the students better. For example, one may take a position where he hands out and collects the test paper. The other may take a position where he only keeps an eye on the students. By that way, teacher can prevent their concentration from being separated. We also have a way in which students can accuse other students of cheating when they feel suspicious of others. However, I do not recommend this way as it may encourage other students to accuse others unjustly. This may promote distrust among students and ruin the harmonious atmosphere among friends. Therefore, I believe the best way to prevent cheating is to reinforce ethics education and let students realize why they shouldn't cheat on the test themselves. They should learn by themselves that it's always important to be honest and compete fairly with their own skills and effort.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

You explicitly explained your views and opinions on this matter! This is superb! -Faith-
First of all, schools can put more teachers into the test sites. 
>> CORRECT
OR: First of all, schools can assign more teachers in testing centers.
If the teachers have separate roles in different places, it may help them to keep an eye on the students better. 
>> If teachers have separate roles in different places, it may help them to keep an eye on the students better. 
For example, one may take a position where he hands out and collects the test paper. 
>> CORRECT
The other may take a position where he only keeps an eye on the students.
>> CORRECT
OR: The other may take a position where he only monitors the students.
By that way, teacher can prevent their concentration from being separated. 
>> That way, teacher can prevent their concentration from being separated. 
We also have a way in which students can accuse other students of cheating when they feel suspicious of others. 
>> We also have a way in which students can report others of cheating when they feel suspicious of them. 
However, I do not recommend this way as it may encourage other students to accuse others unjustly. 
>> CORRECT
This may promote distrust among students and ruin the harmonious atmosphere among friends. 
>> CORRECT 
Therefore, I believe the best way to prevent cheating is to reinforce ethics education and let students realize why they shouldn't cheat on the test themselves. 
>> CORRECT
OR: Therefore, I believe the best way to prevent cheating is to promote ethics education and let students discern that cheating is unethical.
They should learn by themselves that it's always important to be honest and compete fairly with their own skills and effort.
>> CORRECT
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