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Have you ever attended a big international conference? Share your experience in a short paragraph.

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Yes, I had exprience that during worked with drama production team. Famous actor was appeared in that drama, many reporter visited our conference. A lot of actor's sraff came in hotel coforence room, so I had so many concern. But that confernce was good, I mean no problem in there, So I was happy after conference.

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Great to see you here Eva!

This is a very exciting conference and I wish I was a part of the reporter's team as well.

Big events invite big people in the entertainment world to bring star power and attract the media and publicity. This will be good for the marketing plan.

Big thanks for sharing! We will come by this topic as we have our lesson tomorrow.

See you then!

-T. Donna =)

Yes, I had exprience that during worked with drama production team. 
>> Yes, I had experienced that working with a drama production team. 

Famous actor was appeared in that drama, many reporter visited our conference. 
>> Famous actors appeared in that drama and many reporters visited our conference. 

A lot of actor's sraff came in hotel coforence room, so I had so many concern. 
>> A lot of the actor's staff came in the hotel's conference room, so I had so many concerns. 

But that confernce was good, I mean no problem in there, So I was happy after conference.
>> But that conference was good, I mean not much problem there. So I was happy after the conference.
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