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I'm usually wake up at 7o'clock and then I'm always do my morning routine.
After that I'm usually eat fruits for breakfast and then I'm study as much as possible.
After that I'm go to work and finish working I'm always come home.
And then I'm have dinner.
My weekday is same.
in case of the weekend, Mom and I are go to church after worship.
We usually are go to have lunch with Àüµµ»ç´Ô and then we're do whatever her want to.

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Goodmorning, Jin!
Thank you for taking time to do your homework. Please take note of the corrections I gave. Most of them are base on the usage and forms of your pronouns and verbs. Always remember that when you are using "be- verbs", you must add -ing to the end of the following verb. For example: I'm/ I am always doing my morning routine. Since the "'m/am" in "I'm/I am" is a "be-verb", the next verb "do" must have - ing at the end making it "doing". Let's discuss this more in class. Have a good day!
~Elica~
I'm usually wake up at 7o'clock and then I'm always do my morning routine.
>>I usually wake up at 7 o'clock and I always do my morning routine. 
OR
>>I usually wake up at 7'oclock then always do my morning routine. 
After that I'm usually eat fruits for breakfast and then I'm study as much as possible.
>>After that, I usually eat fruits for breakfast and then, I'm studying as much as possible. 
After that I'm go to work and finish working I'm always come home.
>>I go to work and when I finish working, I'm always going straight home. 
And then I'm have dinner.
>>Then, I'm having dinner. 
My weekday is same.
>>My weekdays are all the same. 
in case of the weekend, Mom and I are go to church after worship.
>>In case of the weekend, Mom and I are going to church to worship.
We usually are go to have lunch with Àüµµ»ç´Ô and then we're do whatever her want to.
>>We usually go to have lunch with Àüµµ»ç´Ô and then we're doing whatever she wants.
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