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Can you talk about four restaurants near your house where you eat?

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let me see.
there is a lot of restaurants where I have been to. there are the best 4 restaurants in each different meal. for salad, beef, and pork, Korean traditional food. one of my favorite restaurants is about pork, to be specific, it is about Korean BBQ. they have a different way to make pork more softly and they have many delicious side dishes. of course, those employees are so kindly and nicely.

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Wow! 
The food must be really good there. 
You remember the types of food specifically! ~ 
Thank you for sharing these places with me! 


~t. Ally


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let me see.
>> CORRECT!

there is a lot of restaurants where I have been to. there are the best 4 restaurants in each different meal. for salad, beef, and pork, Korean traditional food. 
>> There are a lot of restaurants I have been to. In my opinion, there are 4 of the best restaurants for each of these meals: salad, beef, pork, and Korean food.

one of my favorite restaurants is about pork, to be specific, it is about Korean BBQ.
>> One of my favorite restaurants cook pork, to be specific, Korean BBQ.

they have a different way to make pork more softly and they have many delicious side dishes. 
>> They have a different way of making the pork more soft and tender, and they have many delicious side dishes.

of course, those employees are so kindly and nicely.
>> Of course, the employees there are so kind and nice.
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