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Q:If you would cook something for your parents, what would it be?
A:If I cook something for my parents, it will be the most delicious food.
First, my parents will like delicious food.
Second, my parents always said delicious when I made any foods.

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Hello Paul! Good job in giving more details in your homework today!

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila


A:If I cook something for my parents, it will be the most delicious food.
>>CORRECT

First, my parents will like delicious food.
>>CORRECT
OR>>First, my parents like delicious food.

Second, my parents always said delicious when I made any foods.
>>Second, my parents always said it's delicious when I made food.
OR>>Second, my parents would always say it's delicious when I cook food.
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