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I\'m not good at dancing...

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I'm not good at dancing, but I love it, but you know..this is very difficult. If I want to good at dancing, I have to good at flexible, and memorising. Focus in the memorising, these mean my body have to memorising the choreography. I love dancing, so I want to good at it. I follow the k-pop, I follow someone's dance, but I can't do like them...These is too difficult, I have to twist my body, roll over, jumping. When I done these, my sweather becoming wet them self. Anyway, This is so difficult, and hard to do this, but sometimes I want to good at dancing.

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Hi Maria!

It is so true that memorizing is our enemy in dancing. If you do not have that skill, that is not only the problem. The main problem is: Can you really move your body well?

Well, all of us have talents. Sometimes with constant correct practice, it makes perfect. There is always an academy to teach us, If we still can't then just learn another skill.

Thank you for sharing your dancing experience. 

See you soon!

-T. Donna =)

I'm not good at dancing, but I love it, but you know..this is very difficult.
>> Correct!
Or: I'm not good at dancing but I love it. This is very difficult.

If I want to good at dancing, I have to good at flexible, and memorising. 
>> If I want to be good at dancing, I have to be good at being flexible, and memorizing. 

Focus in the memorising, these mean my body have to memorising the choreography. 
>> Focusing on memorizing means my body has to memorize the choreography. 

I love dancing, so I want to good at it. I follow the k-pop, I follow someone's dance, but I can't do like them...
>> I love dancing, so I want to be good at it. I try to follow K-pop and I also follow someone's dance, but I can't do it like them.

These is too difficult, I have to twist my body, roll over, jumping. When I done these, my sweather becoming wet them self. 
>> 
These are too difficult. I have to twist my body, roll over, and jump. When I'm done with these, my sweater becomes wet. 

Anyway, This is so difficult, and hard to do this, but sometimes I want to good at dancing.
>> Anyway, this is so difficult to do this, but sometimes I want to be good at dancing.
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