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Q. Do you think the teacher should assign seats to students? Why or why not?

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A. I think the teacher should not assign seats to students.
Choosing seats by own is a liberty for studying students.
There is not compulsory assigning seats in university lectures or corporate seminars.
Likewise, elementary, secondary and high school students also should be able to choose their placements.
However, in my school days, we had to spend almost day sitting and always someone is unsatisfactory with placements.
So, we picked a seat randomly and I thought that's a good way to guarantee diverse and fair placements.
But, of course, I think there should be exceptions for students who must be protected because of physical and psychological problems.

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Hi, Da Hae. ^^ 

This composition is done well! 
Thank you so much for your effort. 
That's true! I agree with you. ^^ 
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I think the teacher should not assign seats to students.
>> CORRECT!

Choosing seats by own is a liberty for studying students.
>> Choosing seats on their own is a liberty for students.

There is not compulsory assigning seats in university lectures or corporate seminars.
>> It is not compulsory to assign seats in university lectures or corporate seminars.

Likewise, elementary, secondary and high school students also should be able to choose their placements.
>> CORRECT!

However, in my school days, we had to spend almost day sitting and always someone is unsatisfactory with placements.
>> However, during my time in school, we had to spend almost all day just sitting down, and someone would always be unsatisfied with their seats.

So, we picked a seat randomly and I thought that's a good way to guarantee diverse and fair placements.
>> CORRECT!

But, of course, I think there should be exceptions for students who must be protected because of physical and psychological problems.
>> CORRECT!
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