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Because urban areas are developed in a good way to live.
Public transportation is well established in urban areas.
Also it is convenient to live in government offices and convenient facilities.
So people prefer urban areas.
Many people want to live in urban areas, so city gets crowded.
Also, house prices are getting expensive.
There is a gap between the rich and the poor in urban and non-urban areas.

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Because urban areas are developed in a good way to live.
>>> CORRECT
Public transportation is well established in urban areas.
>>> CORRECT
Also it is convenient to live in government offices and convenient facilities.
>>> CORRECT
So people prefer urban areas.
OR>>> So people prefer living in urban areas.  
Many people want to live in urban areas, so cities get crowded.
>>> CORRECT
Also, house prices are getting expensive.
OR>>> Also, house prices are increasing. 
There is a gap between the rich and the poor in urban and non-urban areas.
>>> CORRECT

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