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Dear Don,

I met a lot of customers in the hospital. Most customer are very good manner and mind. but few person are bad manner and behavior.
Now, we can not give anything to end user. for example, Doctor, Laboratory technician, a person related Hospital and so on.
but about 15 years ago, we could give something to the customer. at the time, a customer who have manage the laboratory want to receive something from me. I thought, he would give a fovor to me, so I gave a lot of things to him. but I had no favors from him.
after 1 year, I have talk about him with a sales man and he also gave a lot of something to him.

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Hi Andrew!

Happy Monday to you. See you again later ^^

Dear Don,

I met a lot of customers in the hospital. Most customer are very good manner and mind. but few person are bad manner and behavior.
>> I met a lot of customers in the hospital. Most customers have very good manners and open minded but few people have bad manners and behavior.

Now, we can not give anything to end user. for example, Doctor, Laboratory technician, a person related Hospital and so on.
>> Now, we can not give anything to the end users for example the Doctors, the Laboratory technicians, a person whose job is related to Hospital and so on.

but about 15 years ago, we could give something to the customer. at the time, a customer who have manage the laboratory want to receive something from me. I thought, he would give a fovor to me, so I gave a lot of things to him. but I had no favors from him.
>>  But about 15 years ago, we can give something to the customer. At the time, a customer who manages the laboratory wants to receive something from me. I thought I would get something from him, so I gave a lot of things to him but my favor wasn't returned.

after 1 year, I have talk about him with a sales man and he also gave a lot of something to him.
>> After 1 year, I have talked about him with another sales man and he also gave a lot of favor from him.
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