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1. Some people are serious ____about_____ investing _____to____ the stock market.
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Hi Chloe!
It's good for us to continue working hard. 
We are shooting for something better than we are now.
Never give up.^^
~ Teacher Sharon
1. Some people are serious about investing to the stock market.
>>  Some people are serious about investing in the stock market.
2. We are concerned about how long it is taking him to recover to his illness.
>> We are concerned about how long it is taking him to recover from his illness.
3. Because they are guilty of the crime, it is possible that they will be punished on it.
>> Because they are guilty of the crime, it is possible that they will be punished for it.
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