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I like to make egg and ham sandwiches for my new frends at school.
I like egg and ham sandwiches.
it will be very yummy ^^.
and if anyone who does not like my egg and ham sandwiches i will give them street sandwiches.

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Hi-ho Ruby!
I think everybody will like your egg and ham sandwiches because they are yummy and made with love. I wish I could taste them too in the future! ^ ^
-Rachel 
I like to make egg and ham sandwiches for my new frends at school.
>> correct (we  just spell friends as F-R-I-E-N-D-S)
I like egg and ham sandwiches.
>> correct
it will be very yummy ^^.
>> correct
>> OR: It will be very delicious. 
and if anyone who does not like my egg and ham sandwiches I will give them street sandwiches.
>> And if anyone does not like egg and ham sandwiches, I will give them street sandwiches. 

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