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Usually young people think of the old as old fashioned, useless and stereotyped people. Some of young people don't like that the old has concern about their life. But I think that the new things can be invented based on the old things. So I think that we have to respect and admire the old as the existence of them.

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Hi, Ju Yeong. Welcome back!^^ I appreciate your opinions on ageism and I agree with your opinions, most importantly, we should respect older people for their existence. They can still contribute to our society in many ways we do not see. Thank you once again for your homework. Have a great evening! ~Teacher Jane c",)


Usually young people think of the old as old fashioned, useless and stereotyped people.
>> Usually, young people think of old people as old-fashioned, useless, and stereotyped people.

Some of young people don't like that the old has concern about their life.
>> Some young people do not like that the old are concerned about them.

But I think that the new things can be invented based on the old things.
>> But I think that new things can be invented based on the old things.

So I think that we have to respect and admire the old as the existence of them.
>> So I think that we have to respect and admire the old for their existence.
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