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1. How do you describe a hero?

Hero is people who makes us to live good.

2. For you, who is the greatest hero of all time?

My mom is the greatest hero for me.

3. Is there a hero in your life? What makes him or her your hero?

Yes, there is a hero in my life and she is a hero because she is kind.

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Hello Geonha! Great job in adding details in your homework!

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow! :)

~Teacher Sheila

Hero is people who makes us to live good.
>>Heroes are people who let us live good.

My mom is the greatest hero for me.
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Yes, there is a hero in my life and she is a hero because she is kind.
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