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What would you do if you had to travel to a country where it's people don't know how to speak neither your language or English?
-> I'll use translator if I had to travel to a country it's people don't know how to speak neither my language or English.
Because everyone can use the translator easily, the translator can translate almost any country's language.
And if we use translator, we can talk to another county people with the language in the translator.
So I'll use translator if I had to travel to a country it's people don't know how to speak neither my language or English.

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I'll use translator if I had to travel to a country it's people don't know how to speak neither my language or English.
>> I'll use translator if I had to travel to a country and it's people don't know how to speak neither my language or English.

Because everyone can use the translator easily, the translator can translate almost any country's language.
>> Everyone can use translators easily. Translators can translate almost any country's language.

And if we use translator, we can talk to another county people with the language in the translator.
>>And if we use this, we can talk to people from other countries.

So I'll use translator if I had to travel to a country it's people don't know how to speak neither my language or English.
>> So this is the thing that I'll do.
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