¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Lego ninjago

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*ÁÖ
2021-01-31 340

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I love lego. First time I see lego I was 6year old.That time I was love lego city.but then! I see really great thing!!!
Lego NINJAGO!!(It`s my greatest lego series!!)After that time ninjago is my favorite lego.So I buy them,and making them,and playing
them.(also remordeling) Because It`s ve~~~~ry cool, awsome,great And it has super great stories
How can anyone ever don`t like this??(My father dos.Because he said it`s expencive,but I don`t care)
Any way I like lego ninjago!!!!!!

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Seung Ju! ^^

Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy the rest of the day! :)

~ T. Tricia


I love lego.
>> CORRECT!

First time I see lego I was 6year old.
>> I was 6 years old when I first saw Lego.

That time I was love lego city.
>> A that time I started to love Lego city.

but then! I see really great thing!!!
>> But then, I saw something greater.

Lego NINJAGO!!(It`s my greatest lego series!!)
>> It's the Lego Ninjago, it's my greatest Lego series.

After that time ninjago is my favorite lego.
>> Since then, Ninjago has become my favorite Lego series.

So I buy them,and making them,and playing them. (also remordeling)
>> So, I bought them and build, remodel and play them.

Because It`s ve~~~~ry cool, awsome,great And it has super great stories
>> Because it`s very cool, awesome and great. It also has very great stories.

How can anyone ever don`t like this??(My father dos.
>> How can anyone dislike it? My father does.

Because he said it`s expencive,but I don`t care)
>> Because he said it's expensive, but I don`t care.

Any way I like lego ninjago!!!!!!
>> Anyway, I like Lego Ninjago!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
105162 What is the most adorable animal? Why? ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-29 1
105161 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-29 1
105160 My new project ¹Ú*¸í ¿Ï·á 2021-01-29 333
105159 Question º¯*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-29 5
105158 Diet ±è*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-29 263
105157 My opinion about junk food ¼±*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 373
105156 Would you like a computer to control your house for you? ¼­*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 325
105155 Learning foreign language is about changing yourself À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 1
105154 behind story. ½Å*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 1
105153 In your opinion, which season is the most beautiful? Çã*´Ã ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 4
105152 What is the best game in the waterpark? ±è*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 0
105151 homework ³ë*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 2
105150 Do you agree that all students should be required to take a... ±è*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 0
105149 Interesting activities that I did yesterday Á¶*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 1
105148 My assignment Çã*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 290
105147 Hmg Àå*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 296
105146 Homework (213) ¹Ú*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 319
105145 Homework ±è*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 0
105144 Do you think you are aging gracefully? Á¤*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 386
105143 What\'s the most disgusting food you ever ate in a restaurant? ±è*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-01-28 279

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04