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Would you choose a different field if you were to start your education over again? Why? Why not?

작성자: 김*지
2021-01-31 291

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If I were to start my education over again, I would not choose a different field. There are numerous fields that we can choose as a high school student. Not only entering the college, but we can get a job or do anything without any suppression to find our aptitude. But I chose to study more and applied for the university. To be honest, I had not considered any other fields that I could go. My major is food and nutrition and I don't know what I should do in the future. However, I'm sure that I'm going to agonize no matter what major I would have and what field I had chosen so I do not regret my past. I just learned a lesson for my choice; there is no right answer for one's life. When I was a student, I thought it is the best to be accepted by the university which is ranked at the highest hierarchy. However, it was not. The best is to do something that I really want to do. Therefore, from now on, I'll try to find the most suitable job or field that I could show my capacity to the world.

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Hello Min Ji! Thank you for completing your homework. Check below for the corrections I made. Have a good day!

If I were to start my education over again, I would not choose a different field. 
>>CORRECT!
There are numerous fields that we can choose as a high school student. 
>>There are numerous fields that we can choose from as high school students. 
>>OR: There are numerous fields that I can choose from as a high school student. 
Not only entering the college, but we can get a job or do anything without any suppression to find our aptitude. 
>>It's not only about entering college, it can also be related to getting a job or doing anything freely to discover our abilities.
But I chose to study more and applied for the university. 
>>In my case, I chose to study more so I applied to a university.
To be honest, I had not considered any other fields that I could go. 
>>To be honest, I had not considered any other fields to go. 
My major is food and nutrition and I don't know what I should do in the future. 
>>CORRECT!
However, I'm sure that I'm going to agonize no matter what major I would have and what field I had chosen so I do not regret my past. 
>>However, I'm sure that I'm going to deal with hardship no matter what major I would have or what field I had chosen, so I do not regret my past. 
I just learned a lesson for my choice; there is no right answer for one's life. 
>>I just learn a lesson from choices made and that is "There is no right answer in one's life". 
When I was a student, I thought it is the best to be accepted by the university which is ranked at the highest hierarchy. However, it was not. 
>>When I was a student, I thought it is best to be accepted by a top university. However, I realized that it was not the case.
The best is to do something that I really want to do. 
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, from now on, I'll try to find the most suitable job or field that I could show my capacity to the world.
>>Therefore, from now on, I'll try to find the most suitable job or field for me so I could show my  abilities to the world.
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