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-Who do you admire the most and why?- (^-^)
I admire my parents
Because my mom is always working hard.
And my dad also always working hard for our family~^^
I love my family!!

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Hello Jenny!  I see how you cherish your family a lot. Good girl :)

~ Teacher Aki ^^

I admire my parents.

>> Correct.

OR: The people that I admire the most are my parents.
Because my mom is always working hard.  

>> Correct.

OR: Because my mom always works hard.

And my dad also always working hard for our family~^^

>> And my dad also, is always working hard for our family.

OR: and my dad too. He always works hard for our family.
I love my family!!

>> Correct.

OR: I cherish my family.

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