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Why do you think we have weekends?

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We must have weekends.
If you did hard work, you must have a rest time.
Because you will be tired.
So we need weekends.

The life be like without weekends are not good.
It is terrible.
They are must do work again and again.

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Hello Matt! ^^

Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy the rest of the day! :)

~ T. Tricia


We must have weekends.
>> CORRECT!

If you did hard work, you must have a rest time.
>> CORRECT!

Because you will be tired.
>> CORRECT!

So we need weekends.
>> CORRECT!

The life be like without weekends are not good.
>> Life without weekends is not good.

It is terrible.
>> CORRECT!

They are must do work again and again.
>> They are must work again and again.
OR>> People will be working non-stop.
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