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- What are the advantages of having an internet connection? Why?

We can communicate to other people who is in the place that's far with us because for that people, going to there and talk with him (her) is hard.

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Hello Geonha! You did great in your homework!

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow! :)

~Teacher Sheila


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