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In recent years, many people live alone because of the industrialization and personal reasons. There are a lot of pros living alone. First of all, single-person family can have a lot of free time so they have many opportunities to do what they like if they have a mind. Secondly, living alone forces a person to learn some basic skills including cooking, cleaning the house, paying the utility bills, managing personal finance, purchasing daily commodities and many more important skills. Finally, a sense of freedom with an privacy is something considered as the most desirable element of a happy life. This is the main reason why single occupant tends to be seen as a successful peer of the society. On the other hand, living independently can be extremely costly as life is becoming increasingly complex and property price is getting high. This has created a difficult situation in finding an accommodation at a reasonable price. Furthermore, lone occupants may feel lonely and have psychologica

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In recent years, many people live alone because of the industrialization and personal reasons. 
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There are a lot of pros living alone.
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 First of all, single-person family can have a lot of free time so they have many opportunities to do what they like if they have a mind. 
>>>  First of all, single-person family can have a lot of free time so they have many opportunities to do what they like anytime.
Secondly, living alone forces a person to learn some basic skills including cooking, cleaning the house, paying the utility bills, managing personal finance, purchasing daily commodities and many more important skills.
>>> CORRECT
 Finally, a sense of freedom with an privacy is something considered as the most desirable element of a happy life. 
>>> CORRECT
This is the main reason why single occupant tends to be seen as a successful peer of the society. 
>>> CORRECT
On the other hand, living independently can be extremely costly as life is becoming increasingly complex and property price is getting high. 
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This has created a difficult situation in finding an accommodation at a reasonable price.
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 Furthermore, alone occupants may feel lonely and have psychological...
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