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What religion do you believe and practice?

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Dear Don,

I think your call was not clear these days. I used wired headphone.
I have no religion, my grandmother believe in buddhism. but I think religion is good for people. there are a lot of good behaviors and practice in the religion book or doctrine. for example, help poor person near by you and forgive your against person and so on.
What is your religion? as I said, in Korea, there are a lot of christian, but because of Covid19, they could not assemble in church, but they gathered a lot of peosons, so Covid patients were increased a lot. I don't understand their behaviors. because of their behavior, a lot of persons were damaged.

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Hi Andrew!

See you again tomorrow ^^

T. DON

Dear Don,

I think your call was not clear these days. I used wired headphone.
>> I think your call was not clear for these past days. I used a wired headphones in our class.

I have no religion, my grandmother believe in buddhism. but I think religion is good for people. there are a lot of good behaviors and practice in the religion book or doctrine. for example, help poor person near by you and forgive your against person and so on.
>> I have no religion, my grandmother believed in Buddhism but I think religion is good for people. There are a lot of good behaviors and practices in a religion's books or doctrines. For example, to help the poor people near by you and forgive your enemy and so on.

What is your religion? as I said, in Korea, there are a lot of christian, but because of Covid19, they could not assemble in church, but they gathered a lot of peosons, so Covid patients were increased a lot. I don't understand their behaviors. because of their behavior, a lot of persons were damaged.
>> What is your religion? as I said, in Korea, there are a lot of Christians, but because of Covid19, they could not assemble in churches but they gather a lot of believers and so Covid patients increased a lot. I don't understand their behavior but because of it, a lot of people were infected.
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