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I don\'t think mermaids are real

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Mabye everybody think mermaids are not real creature. Mermaids has a fish fin, and long hair. They sometimes sing a song, or do magic, but a person has a long leg, and can't use a magic, so it can't be real. Also, they can breath in a sea, and talking with fish. In a the Arial's friends are fish, bird, and crab. The king of Arial's kingdom, he can use trident, and using magic, so this is why I don't think mermaids are real

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Hi Maria!

Absolutely, you have said it- mermaids are not real creatures. They are only for entertainment in the form of a movie or a circus character.

There are other imaginary creatures as well such as the sphynx or a centaur found in ancient mythical stories that cannot be proven today.

I am grateful for your very good answer!

See you in class.

-T. Donna =)

Mabye everybody think mermaids are not real creature. 
>> Maybe everybody thinks that mermaids are not real creatures.

Mermaids has a fish fin, and long hair. They sometimes sing a song, or do magic, but a person has a long leg, and can't use a magic, so it can't be real. 
>> Mermaids have a fish fin and long hair. They sometimes sing a song, or do magic but a person has a long leg and can't use magic so it can't be real. 

Also, they can breath in a sea, and talking with fish. In a the Arial's friends are fish, bird, and crab. 
>> Also, they can breath in the sea, and talk with fish. Ariel's friends are fish, birds, and crabs. 

The king of Arial's kingdom, he can use trident, and using magic, so this is why I don't think mermaids are real
>> The king of Ariel's kingdom can use a trident magic so this is why I don't think mermaids are real.
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