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I just do learning English... for my personal ability
I want to be a man having a lot of ability more than other peoples..
and having a ability of speaking English here is in south Korea is one of the great challenge so I want to get it
and I'm learning to stand out a pain from English

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Good evening Sir Jin!😊
I'm happy that you are passionate about learning English not for anything else but for your personal development. Be in love with English always and you will soon see the result of your hard work. Keep up the good work! 👍
Always,
~Kelly^^
I just do learning English... for my personal ability
>> I just learn English for my personal development.
I want to be a man having a lot of ability more than other peoples..
>> I want to be a man who has a lot of abilities more than other people.
and having a ability of speaking English here is in south Korea is one of the great challenge so I want to get it
>> Having the ability to speak in English here in South Korea is a big challenge so I want to be good at it.
and I'm learning to stand out a pain from English
>> And I'm learning to stand out in the world of English speakers.
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