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In my country, people love to talk about each other's love stories whether it is a happy story or not.
As people are talking about our their own stories, they share their feelings and opinions. Sometimes people like to talk about someone else.

Jullie: I haven't know i should upload essay in this page. I knew that homework is speaking homework!sorry.
Plus i have a question. I think i forgot what i learned about "How's it going" and "How are you doing" difference.
Is it right we say How's it going to friends and close relationships and How are you doing is used to professor or older...??

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Hi there, Julie!

Thanks for sending your homework! Yes, student upload their homework on the website but it is not mandatory. In fact, I have several students who don't upload anything so don't worry about it. Catch you next week!

Cheers, 
Jean~~


In my country, people love to talk about each other's love stories whether it is a happy story or not.
>> In my country, people love to talk about each other's love stories whether it is a happy one or not.

As people are talking about our their own stories, they share their feelings and opinions. 
>> As people talk about their own stories, they share their feelings and opinions. 

Sometimes people like to talk about someone else.
>> correct~~

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Is it right we say How's it going to friends and close relationships and How are you doing is used to professor or older...??
>> Spot on! It's not really appropriate to use "How's it going?" when you talk to your professor or someone who is older than you.^^
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