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It is a little bit of a positive development.
We can't meet people completely because of the Corona virus.
So we use online more than face to face.
But sometimes we have to meet face to face.
There's a limit to online.
And if we do it online more, we can get depressed.
Therefore sometimes it would be better to meet face to face than online.

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Hi there Eden! ^^ The day you take complete responsibility for yourself, the day you stop making any excuses, that¡¯s the day you start to the top. However difficult life may seem, there is always something you can do and succeed at. Keep writing! Keep learning!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
It is a little bit of a positive development.
>>> CORRECT
We can't meet people completely because of the Corona virus.
>>> CORRECT
So we use online more than face to face.
>>> CORRECT
But sometimes we have to meet face to face.
>>> CORRECT
There's a limit to online.
>>> There's a limitation online.
And if we do it online more, we can get depressed.
>>> And if we do more online classes, we can be depressed.
Therefore sometimes it would be better to meet face to face than online.
>>> CORRECT

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