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What type of music do you most like to listen to?

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I like most kinds of music, but I don't listen to K-pop and heavy metal.
I've been so into pop music since 2009 and have written a lot of reviews about songs on my blog.
Songs of One Direction, Taylor Swift, Katy Perry, Paramore, Avril Lavigne and many other singers were my everything.
Especially, I love songs which have beautiful and cheerful lyrics like 'What Makes You Beautiful' from One Direction, 'Mean' from Taylor Swift, 'Everybody Hurts' from Avril Lavigne.
These days, I usually listen to musical numbers such as 'All I ask of you' from the musical The Phantom of The Opera, 'Fresh Blood' from the musical Dracula and etc.
I also like listening to classical music like symphonies and sonatas. Classical music can make me comfortable, so I usually listen to it whenever I feel tired or sleepy.

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Hi Gemma!😍
Thank you for sharing your favorite songs and singers.😊 I am impressed how passionate you are about music. Just like you, music is already part of my life that's why I agree that music is very therapeutic. Keep enjoying and relaxing while listening to your favorite songs.😉 In addition, I want to commend you for making good sentences. Keep it up!
Always,
~Kelly^^
I like most kinds of music, but I don't listen to K-pop and heavy metal.
>> Correct.
I've been so into pop music since 2009 and have written a lot of reviews about songs on my blog.
>> Correct.
Songs of One Direction, Taylor Swift, Katy Perry, Paramore, Avril Lavigne and many other singers were my everything.
>> Correct.
Especially, I love songs which have beautiful and cheerful lyrics like 'What Makes You Beautiful' from One Direction, 'Mean' from Taylor Swift, 'Everybody Hurts' from Avril Lavigne.
>> Correct.
These days, I usually listen to musical numbers such as 'All I ask of you' from the musical The Phantom of The Opera, 'Fresh Blood' from the musical Dracula and etc.
>> Correct.
I also like listening to classical music like symphonies and sonatas. Classical music can make me comfortable, so I usually listen to it whenever I feel tired or sleepy.
>> Correct.
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