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Do you like arts?

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Arts make human more human being.
When I was young, I learned playing the piano for 6 years. During that time, music enhenced me better. Now I prefer listening rather than playing. As I get older, I'm interested in painting. I enjoy visitting an art exhibition. Fortunately there is Seoul Art Center nesr my house. I can walk around in there and feel the atmosphere emanated from the area where is built with a great artificial purpose. I like watching variouse genre of arts. Art have nobility and make human incomparable to other living things.
I also want to be a person who undertand and learn from artist's noblish apirit.

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Hi there Young Won!

Arts as an expression of human creative imagination and display of skills is undeniably one that places us human beings at  a different level of animals apart from any other species on earth.

It also makes us vulnerable and frail, at the same time we can be glorified among so many things that humans experience.

I am glad that you have been able to express yourself in this simple art of writing. It's a very good one.

See you tomorrow in class!

-T. Donna =)

Arts make human more human being.
>> Arts makes human to become a more human being.

When I was young, I learned playing the piano for 6 years. During that time, music enhenced me better. 
>> Correct!
Or: enhanced (SPELLING)

Now I prefer listening rather than playing. As I get older, I'm interested in painting. I enjoy visitting an art exhibition. 
>> Correct!
Or: visiting (SPELLING)

Fortunately there is Seoul Art Center nesr my house. I can walk around in there and feel the atmosphere emanated from the area where is built with a great artificial purpose. 
>> Fortunately, there is the Seoul Art Center near my house. I can walk around there and feel the atmosphere emanating from the area where it is built with a great artifact purpose. 

I like watching variouse genre of arts. Art have nobility and make human incomparable to other living things.
>> I like watching various genre of arts. Arts has nobility and makes human incomparable to other living things.

I also want to be a person who undertand and learn from artist's noblish apirit.
>> Correct!
Or: understand, noble, spirit (SPELLING)
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