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I think it is because it is different for everyone.
I thikn younger people like vertical things and older people like horizontal things.
Vertical cities and be uncomfortable because they are high, and horizontal cities can be uncomfortable because they are low.
On the contray, it can be good because it is high or low.
There will be advantages and disadvantages of Vertical and horizontal cities.
But the more Vertical and horizontal cities balance, the more.

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I think it is because it is different for everyone.
>>> CORRECT
I thikn younger people like vertical things and older people like horizontal things.
>>> I think younger people like vertical things and older people like horizontal things.
Vertical cities and be uncomfortable because they are high, and horizontal cities can be uncomfortable because they are low.
>>> Vertical cities could be uncomfortable because they are high, and horizontal cities can be uncomfortable because they are low.
On the contray, it can be good because it is high or low.
>>> On the contrary, it could be good whether it is high or low.
There will be advantages and disadvantages of vertical and horizontal cities.
>>> CORRECT
But the more Vertical and horizontal cities balance, the more.
>>> But vertical and horizontal cities should be more balanced. 
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