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The communication doesn't mean just saying something. It is common to communicate with facial expressions and other elements when we talk with someone. There are a lot of application providing translation with any language. The google is the most famous website regarding this function but people haven't satisfied with it because of incorrect results. Someday, it will be accurate and can be used anywhere, anytime and in any situation. I have imagined if we don't need to speak out because of the advance of technology. If we implement kind of memory chip into the brain, we could communicate with this chip without saying. I feel really scared, even if it is my imagination. There are many development of artificial intelligence products and we expect that there will be more continent in human life. However, we have a lot of concerns against it because it can destroy the fundamental things that might result in misfortune for humans. We can't stop these revolution but have to prepare for i

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Hi there Mr. Hwang~! ^^ Take up one idea, make that one idea your life. Think of it, dream of it, live on that idea. Let the brain, muscles, nerves, every part of your body be full of that idea, and just leave every other idea alone. This is the way to success. 
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The communication doesn't mean just saying something.
>>> Communication doesn't mean just saying something. (I agree, I thought if I give you this question, you'd be leaving me soon.. haha)
 It is common to communicate with facial expressions and other elements when we talk with someone.
>>> CORRECT
 There are a lot of application providing translation with any language. 
>>>  There are a lot of applications providing translations in languages. 
The google is the most famous website regarding this function but people haven't satisfied with it because of incorrect results.
>>> The google is the most famous website regarding this function but people aren't satisfied with it because of its incorrect results.
Someday, it will be accurate and can be used anywhere, anytime and in any situation. 
>>> CORRECT
I have imagined if we don't need to speak out because of the advance of technology. 
>>> I have imagined if we don't need to speak out because of the advancement of technology. 
If we implement kind of memory chip into the brain, we could communicate with this chip without saying.
>>> If we implement a kind of memory chip into our brain, we could communicate with this chip without saying something.
 I feel really scared, even if it is my imagination. 
>>>  I feel really scared, even if I'm only imagining it. 
There are many development of artificial intelligence products and we expect that there will be more continent in human life. 
>>> There are many development of artificial intelligence products and we expect that there will be more contagious in human life. 
However, we have a lot of concerns against it because it can destroy the fundamental things that might result in misfortune for humans. 
>>> CORRECT
We can't stop these revolution but have to prepare for i
>>> We can't stop these revolution but we have to prepare for... 
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